Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Noah's Story

Recently we attended Noah's parent-teacher conference. We weren't surprised that he received high marks and good reports. The only thing he has work on is editing when he writes (which you'll soon see). His teacher, Miss Groom, told us the students had just finished writing "longer" stories and she shared Noah's with us. Noah, in turn, wanted us to post it on the blog, so here's his story, complete with spelling and punctuation errors... not too bad for a 6-year old!

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by Noah Fuls

Far far away there was the Incredible hulk. he is so strong he runs fast there. hulk lives in new york city hulk does not like to fight bad guys! hulk loves Babys. his friend is buddy he is nice to him. he turns green and strong he's allways good he speeks spanish and engigshl. he gets a chain and ties it around his arch enemy died hulk gets marrd to the love of his life her name is Betty. he can Be nice to animals and be nice to a family. he can knock down a building he meets sandman the hulk decideds to be nice now he fights crime. he can Be nice to miss groom and the hole entire school and nice to the students at school. hulk does now how to swim in lakes and bear lake to. he can jump high on a building. and it knoks down to the grond. wolverine scrapes hulk. he gets so mad at wolverine. hulk jumps on wolverine. wolverine was hurt. then wolverine got really mad at him hulk buys pizza for betty. the end.

2 comments:

Sara and Jacob said...

That is soooo cute!! Love it!

Cheree said...

That it quite the imagination. He did a great job!